It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
In a globalized world where everyone shares their own thoughts and opinions about what happens in the environment surrounding them, apparently the Internet has become the only way with which people find information. However, this can be debatable, since there are also other means of communication, such as the news, newspapers, and the local press, to keep us updated about what is occurring in the world.
For this reason, many people think that social networks, such as Facebook, always tell the truth. Nevertheless, sometimes this can lead to believe to fake news. This occurs because people don’t verify their sources: once you find a news, you should not be immediately involved in its content. Instead, you have to do a research whether that news is true or not, by typing its title in a common web browser.
However, I guess a large number of people prefer a website rather than a newspaper to find information is because is a lot faster, cheaper and more comfortable. For example: if someone wants to know what today’s news are, he just have to click it on a smartphone and you have tons of information about what happened in your country today from your home. However, if you want to find the same information in a newspaper, you have to move from your chair, take the car, and buy it every single day in order to keep you updated.
To conclude, I reckon that the Internet has revolutionized our lives and now it is way easier to get access to the news or to cultural and political information. Nonetheless, I also think that when searching for information, we need to be conscious about whether the source is true or not, by doing our own research.
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- It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information 67
- WRITING TASK 1 THE PIE CHART BELOW SHOW THE AMOUNT OF ELECTRICITY GENERATED BY ENERGY SOURCE IN SCOTLAND FOR 20 YEARS AGO AND LAST YEAR 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
.... However, this can be debatable, since there are also other means of communication, such as the new...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ommon web browser. However, I guess a large number of people prefer a website rather than a n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, for example, i guess, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7560137457 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73212517594 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3275054356 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128108679707 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495344557304 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289163180583 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074128282794 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197671953656 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.