Modern life has changed the old mindset of many people of getting up early. Do you prefer to be one of them or believe in rising early? Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, people are becoming lazy day by day due to the advancement of technology. “Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise”: very true said. And I support this statement to a large extent for some reason. I will highlight the reason in the following paragraphs.
Out of the all reasons, the strongest one to prove my view is an early riser’s day starts with full of energy which flows in for the whole day. Moreover, they get an extra one or two hours to utilize for pursuing their hobbies or healthy activities like yoga, gym, exercise, meditation, reading, etc. For instance, I love to do yoga in the initial rays of the sun that boosts my energy with fresh air to accomplishing my full day hustle. Also in extra hours, I use to planning and organizing my full day.
The other reason to prove my point is that many researchers prove that in the early morning the air quality is far better than in the afternoon and night. That is because of less traffic pollution in the morning and that is the best time to inhale pure oxygen for our body in order to be healthy. As well as, Doctors also recommended to rise early and do some yoga and exercise to keep fit and fine. I have personal experience of their benefits as I badly affected by health last month and the doctor suggests changing my morning habits for my own benefit and I took that advice seriously and improve my health within a week.
On the contrary, some people believe that social life destroys when one rises early as he cannot go to parties or at a social gathering at night. Similarly, some creative people like to work at night to generate creative ideas in dark silence.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite creative people for their ideas and social people, my reasons that boosting energy and extra hours, as well as the morning atmosphere, is logically more beneficial for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended rising'.
Suggestion: recommended rising
...to be healthy. As well as, Doctors also recommended to rise early and do some yoga and exercise to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54022988506 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44772267238 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0249512787 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176810844447 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570972782048 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513477611214 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962949384233 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224125401216 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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