The diagram depicts the carbon cycle and the carbon and another pollutant emission through the industries.
Overall, the diagram shows that the natural synthesis of CO2 and consumption by the plants and emission, IN another hand this illustrate the industrial impact on the environment with regards to CO2.
Firstly, The plants are making their food by the process of Photosynthesis the leaves and stomata absorb the sunlight, and with the help of pigment chlorophyll, they make their food and this process plant absorb CO2 through the environment and produce oxygen. This is the natural cycle, however, the CO2 also deposited in the decayed form below the earth's crust in the form of organic carbon dioxide.
Secondly, The industries are causing so much pollution to the environment while making electricity with the help of the ocean water and fossil fuels, the industries are the big pollutant fir nature by emitting the byproducts like C02 and other gas which are the cause of global warming.
- Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste Other people believe that children should be taught this at home Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 93
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 78
- Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum To what extent do you agree 81
- Most people agree that money cannot bring happiness why is happiness difficult to define how can people achieve happiness give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temperatures higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How should we deal with this problem 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1963190184 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62413228177 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2536445913 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.4 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239721469092 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138016337239 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112689319274 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151533692875 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105381220389 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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