The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Cooperation is an entity in a society for each and every sector for flourishment of its people. Cooperation leads to better harmony between different rank of colleagues. So it's responsibility of government administrative working class to put a seed of cooperation and germante the feeling of sharing with caring. Bitter competition makes a bitter productivity.
Young people should taught cooperation feeling from the early days of schooling by
propogating the feeling of sharing and caring in student among the particular school project. From early age it settles down in the mind of youth. By taking this neccasary steps among the youth it may help to get better feeling of coorespondance and cooperative. Various activities should be organised as specialy by government to introduce the theme of cooperativeness among the pupil of specific teritory among the entire nation.this generate better level of brotherhood among the nations people.
Specially not recommended if society focus it's youth body into qualities like leadership among the specific sectors like government administrative, industry and many other core corporate sector and not imparting any feeling of cooperation and sharply focusses in making it competitive it will give birth to endangerment of flourish society. It makes the memebers more cunning and self centric among the others.
By imparting level of cooperation among the pupil of society it also makes the nation at supreme level of exellency and overall good brotherhood. It also make pupil salubrious among the each other. Its in favour of society whether to bliss it people by imparting strong feeling of cooperation or diverge among the unhealthy bitter competition.
Thus, Society should take better steps and regulate its youth to cooperative nature making flexible for overall society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: makes
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... pupil salubrious among the each other. Its in favour of society whether to bliss i...
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Suggestion: peoples
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture making flexible for overall society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53191489362 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04790483069 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2244611776 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229079139388 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808158528843 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753447813538 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136116559232 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644422797149 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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