Your grandparents are planning a family
gathering. They want to have a fun weekend
somewhere. You know a perfect place to
have the event. Write them an email and
include the following things:
• Tell them about the place you have in
mind.
• Talk about your experiences at the place.
• Describe what the family can do there.
Dear Grandpa,
I just wanted to send you a quick mail to let you know that I’ve come across an amazing deal for our upcoming family event. I think it is a great idea to have a family get-together.
I know about a place in Amazon’s countryside, which is known for organizing events, especially for a medium group of around 10-12 people. I visit this place quite often. I was awestruck with the gigantic golf view course and really enjoyed fishing over there. I must say, it has everything in store for us. For instance, this place has an awesome arrangement for camp firing. In addition to this, it ‘tis surrounded by a lush green environment and, its exquisite sunset point adds to its scenic beauty.
I guess this would be a perfect place for our small family rendezvous, where we can spend quality time with each other and enjoy the moments. Since I am a frequent visitor, I have received passes that are valid till march.
Anyways, thought of letting u guys know about this place. Shall I book this for our gathering in march end?
Looking forward to seeing you.
Love!
John
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| 2021-02-07 | Ankita91Sh | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a medium group of around 10-12 people. I visit this place quite often. I was awe...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...people. I visit this place quite often. I was awestruck with the gigantic golf vi...
^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and really enjoyed fishing over there. I must say, it has everything in store fo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, look, really, so, for instance, i guess, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63917525773 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46822726219 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701030927835 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0611809653 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2307692308 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194767591553 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627080328023 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507548948459 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113604432081 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473697725075 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.