What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
Foundation of Turkish Republic had had major effect on my country. It was affecting whole world especially Asia, Europe and Africa continents. Ataturk has founded Turkish Republic in 23 April 1923 at Ankara with his friends. It brought social, economic, spatial and legal changes.
Firstly it was a new beginning era for Turkey. All the system was arranged again handled with the pionerr people who were close with Mustafa Kemal Ataturk. Its was like a reconstructive time period for whole country which was damaged by wars or occupations. They brought principles and revolutions attendantly. Turkey has been part of the Europe with this revolutions and principles. It was a big step for reaching contemporary level around industrial countries.
Secondly Turkey have had self esteem with founding own republic. It differentiete Turkey from other islamist countries because Turkey have been independent, democratic and secular country. On the contrary of sharia laws, Turkey has developed own laws via courts. They have understood that presiding methot shouldnt be sultanate on the contrary democracy is the best choice for managing the country.
All in all Turkey have witnessed a lot of historical cases in the history. The most effective which reshaped the country have been the foundation of Turkish Republic. It has caused that more civilized community than as it used to be. We have proven that we are not depend to other countries with our freedom.
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I think the most important…
I think the most important historical event in my country is the French Revolution. This was one of the first revolutions where citizens didn't just yell for change, but also helped to make it happen. The revolution of 1789 led to a ban on feudalism and slavery throughout Europe in 1804. There were also different https://uk.eliteassignmenthelp.com/college-assignments ideas about how people should be governed, including an idea that peasants could vote if they live in town centers or cities.
Turkey have had self esteem
Turkey has had self esteem
It differentiete Turkey
It differentiates Turkey
because Turkey have been independent, democratic and secular country.
because Turkey has been an independent, democratic and secular country.
Turkey have witnessed
Turkey has witnessed
The most effective which reshaped the country have been the foundation of Turkish Republic.
The most effective one which reshaped the country has been the foundation of Turkish Republic.
we are not depend to other countries with our freedom.
we do not depend to other countries with our freedom.
Sentence: Turkey has been part of the Europe with this revolutions and principles.
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Sentence: They brought principles and revolutions attendantly.
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Sentence: It differentiete Turkey from other islamist countries because Turkey have been independent, democratic and secular country.
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Sentence: They have understood that presiding methot shouldnt be sultanate on the contrary democracy is the best choice for managing the country.
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