t is critically important that we have goals to achieve in our life. Personally, I believe individuals should follow their dreams and try to achieve them even if they are unachievable. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, Having dreams even though they seem hard to achieve is the greatest motivation in our life. Since ever, the human had tried to achieve the impossible such as, reaching the moon, inventing electricity, and building the technology. Even though these goals seemed unattainable at first, with the hard-working and insisting they became possible. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this example. When I was a student at the university, I dreamed to be one of the best 5% in my department. Even though this goal seemed unachievable at first, I did it because of my hard-working. So, the example is a clear illustration of the idea which says " when you never give up, all your dreams will come true".
Second, the confidence and blessed you feel after achieving your goals. The individual cannot describe the feeling of confidence and happiness which follow the moment of getting what you want in words. For instance, when I achieved my goal of becoming one of the best 5% in my department, I was so proud and jubilant about my achievement.
Third, human always feels that he/she is unstoppable after achieving their goals. On the other hand, some people may become sad and bleak after putting an effort into something they could not achieve. However, these people cannot deny that the works made them better and they learn from their experience.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should follow their impossible goals. This is because we will gain success and prove that anyone can do anything despite its difficulty.
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- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explor 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98692810458 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78614656297 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8875404134 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281627044836 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853467757213 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628768144589 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147494185202 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384541913313 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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