Dear Mr. Lee,
I hope you remember your last journey from New Delhi to Ontario last Sunday, where we had a good discussion regarding the expansion of your restaurants to a global level, and you advised me to contact you out for a job opportunity in your restaurant.
I have worked with many famous brands in the hotel industry, and have hands-on experience in customer handling, order management, and resolving customer complaints. Apart from that, in my current job, in Taj hotel, I am responsible for handling the customer delight department where my team and I put our best efforts for a better customer experience. Therefore, I am looking for a similar job in your restaurant.
Having a relevant academic background and five years of professional experience in the hotel industry would be an advantage for me to perform my duties better and deliver the best results. Furthermore, I have undergone many certifications on customer behavior, which would help me to resolve customer queries with ease in your restaurant.
I have attached my resume with this letter and hope to hear back from you soon.
Kind Regards
Peter Parker
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91272604497 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3000672947 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131293467693 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551189218782 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752814198096 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999308309282 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08753404497 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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