There is an increasing amount advertising directed at children which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisement putt too much pressure on children, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At present, advertisement is one of the major sources of income or information. Undoubtly, there is huge enhancement in advertisements which show the false information about the products or promoting the unnecessary things which has given birth to propaganda that some people think it misguides their infants. Wherever, others believe that it is a positive trend. I will discuss both views with supporting points and my opinion in further paragraphs.
To begin with, there is no doubt that some advertisements which distract the children. To support this, first and foremost, advertisements about junk food like burgers and fries discover the unwise ideas regarding their health. Unwillingly, which makes them potato couch and unhealthy in the long run. Secondly, advertisements about unnecessary stuffs or even about toys can easily influence children but such things pressurize parents to buy such stuff which are sometime unaffordable for them. Most importantly, showing dangerous stunts of bikes and others can easily encourage children to do such things and cause horrible incidents.
On the other hand, other people believe that it is the best way of getting information or even it boosts the economic growth of the country. Probably, majority of advertisements promotes the positivity and beneficial information considering saving environment, wildlife, controlling pollution and so on. Considerably, it helps people to update with global status and about any particular products and field.
All in all, after describing the both views, I can easily conclude that advertisement is a productive source of information but advertisers should promote it in such a positive way so it would not misguide children regarding any false information as they are the upcoming generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Wherever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eople think it misguides their infants. Wherever, others believe that it is a positive t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54945054945 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11685668309 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7046087271 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264498223989 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893884061943 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824550675081 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153004117396 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889588704866 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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