Since the advent of globalization almost every country was able to import and export foods across the borders. Some people advocate that countries should minimize the food import and concentrate on producing more indigenous food products that serve their citizens. I, however, disagree with the statement and will outline the reasons in detail in this essay.
The primary reason behind my disagreement is that the fertility of land is not equally distributed across the world. Some countries like Saudi Arabia, have barren land which is not suitable for growing essential food products. If the government of such countries decide to minimize the import of foods, their citizens would be adversely affected. On the other hand, countries like India and China have more fertile land and hence, could export more food products to other countries which would contribute significantly to their economy. Indeed, if other countries reduce their import from these countries, the economy of these exporting countries would be greatly affected.
Another reason is that people should have access to variety of foods across the world. Any government should not interfere in the food preference of its citizens. Some people would be interested in having native food products such as rice and pulses, while others would prefer international cuisines like Pizzas and Pastas. If governments decrease their import of western foods from other countries, these people would be left with no other option than consuming those indigenous cuisines. This would impact the democratic policy of freedom of choice of these citizens. Hence, governments should not lessen their import of international food products.
In conclusion, not all countries possess equally fertile land and hence, reducing the import of food products would have devastating effects on both the importing and the exporting countries. In addition to this, every citizen has different food preference and governments should not interfere on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48701298701 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63355521837 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480519480519 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.173369164 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255188987524 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104221103096 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669387917845 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191801793237 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048548398794 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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