Even though doctors advice old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this and what are some possible solutions for this.
Considering the deterioration of health in old people, doctors frequently advice them to do some physical activities, but the majority of aged people do not exercise regularly. There are many reasons for this. Some of the reasons are discussed in the following passages along with their solutions.
Undoubtedly, as people grow old, their overall health starts to degrade. Due to this reason, it becomes necessary to take proper care of one’s health. With age, the body tends to loose muscle mass and the working efficiency of all the internal organs, such as heart, liver, kidneys etcetera, is reduced. Due to this, doctors advice old persons to do regular exercise. One of the main reasons for this is that due to old age, people are not able to maintain the level of energy which is required for regular physical exertion. So, they tend to sit in their homes in comfortable chairs and beds. To resolve this problem, special nutrient rich diet can be prescribed for aged people, so that they can maintain sufficient energy levels to do proper exercises.
One other major reason due to which old people do not get enough exercise is the lack of proper infrastructure. Lack of parks and open fields in the urban regions also contribute to this problem. Most of the time it is difficult to do exercises at home, as in urban regions, the average home size is quite small and not enough to do physical exercise. Due to this people tend to visit parks to do such physical activities. The absence of such parks nearby, can also contribute to old people not doing enough exercises because they cannot travel long distances to visit some park to do their exercises. It is the duty of governments to build multiple parks and gardens in the residential areas, so that people especially aged people can do physical activities such as walking, jogging, yoga etcetera to remain healthy.
Conclusively, people of age cannot do necessary physical exercises majorly due to lack to energy and infrastructure. These issues can be resolved by giving them energy rich diet and building proper infrastructure such as parks and gardens where they can do such activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68412076608 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475274725275 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9510871865 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339003389495 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133530952621 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102238264972 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228412890084 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988868681334 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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