People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In devel

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1042, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... example - a person who is very fond of sky diving might accept the risk associated with i...
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Line 3, column 1235, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ken over by the pleasure of the diving. The underlie question is - will it be possible for a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 708, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... - a nuclear scientist is unlikely draw a undisputed conclusion, such as - '...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...itical of a fact that is quite close to ones cerebral, will require a great deal of ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 539, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sness or for serving other reasons. But a unbiased person will not likely to hide...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2939.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 627.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68740031898 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00399520894 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84158054149 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435406698565 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 926.1 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1112773456 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.84375 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.59375 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46875 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110508831259 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033844306072 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502836520357 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828757193085 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076916406003 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.