The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity but there are more immediate problems such as global warming, I would explain my point of view in the latter paragraph.
The surge in human population is due to rapid improvement in medical field and research. Diseases such as small pox had most number of death rates, which has been completely eradicated since the development of their vaccine.
Lack of education for family planning in developing countries has a huge impact on the population growth.
Global warming, the rise in temperature in the polar regions have a great toll on the climate, which affects all living organisms.
Many factors contribute to global warming, for example deforestation because of rise in population and need for land, humans venture to the forest and cut it down to a major extent causing change in environmental balance leading to global warming.
Global warming is a problem that has to be delt immediately.
- In some countries young people have become richer healthier and live longer but they are less happy What are the causes What can be done to address this situation 67
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
- Nowadays the way many people interacy with each other has changed because of technologh In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make Has this become a positive or negative development 61
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages 78
- Animals are in danger of extinction Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans Do you agree or disagree 84
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11728395062 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80524825491 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9810944273 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260136838778 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107197439008 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128162422128 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118259114703 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132597544234 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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