The recent development of large shopping malls is abolishing small shops. This is controversial whether it is a positive or negative change, and I believe there are both good and bad aspects for each.
On the one hand, small shops present numbers of benefits for local residents. First of all, their lower capital investment makes it possible for average families to run them, while shopping malls need huge funds for constitution and maintenance. In addition, as these shops are smaller in size too, higher numbers of them exist in the area, meaning that they are distributed through residential regions and simplify access in the case of emergency or lack of time, as well as reducing traffic congestion. The last but not least advantage of small shops is that their management by local residents helps the area financially, by circulating money between different members, and boosts the level of trust and sympathy among neighbors, for instance, in less privileged areas, people can purchase their needs and pay for them at their convenience.
On the other hand, several advantages can be discussed for large shopping malls. First and foremost is the variety provision for customers, which is an influence of wider storage practices for supermarkets or higher number of shops as per other objects like clothes. Besides, their higher rate of sales, enables them to provide up-to-date products or fresh materials, in case of groceries or food. Putting all these parameters together, saving on scale happens in large stores which leads to offering more discounts to costumers, encouraging them to prefer these stores to the small shops near their homes, and results in bothering to take long commutes and allocate more time for their shopping, since large shopping malls are usually located at crowded non-residential regions or in the countryside.
To sum up, I personally believe that there are bright and dark sides to the emergence of large shopping malls. While they offer more variety and discounts, they are not as easily accessible as local shops, and present financial threats for them as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: smaller
...enance. In addition, as these shops are smaller in size too, higher numbers of them exist in th...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ducing traffic congestion. The last but not least advantage of small shops is that their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1783625731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71123907937 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581871345029 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.804107918 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.583333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247081087349 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11355996993 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103102244766 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179207665936 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882216822183 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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