The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
The given line graph provides information about different people who visited various places in Canada. The data is in the percentage.
Overall, it is seen clearly from the line chart that migrates who born in other countries visited the highest percentage in a library, whereas native English-speaking people most liked to went to a zoo. Meanwhile, citizens of Canada who visited most a cinema as compared to others in Canada.
To embarks with, the cinema that was visited by non-Canadians were around 40%, which was 25% and 30% lower than migrates from other English-speaking countries and Canadians respectively. There were only 10% of newborn migrates, 25% of non-Canadians, and 20% of Canadians went to the theatre.
By contrast, there were 65% of people, who born in other countries most liked go to a library, which was a fifteen-time and a twenty-time higher than people from native English speaking countries and citizens of Canada respectively. While 50% of people from other countries had been visited a zoo, which was more than others in this category in Canada.
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- If some people get a chance to choose between life without work and spending most of the time working then they would choose not to work Agree and disagree 88
- In the modern world it is possible to shop work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others Is it a positive or negative development 73
- The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000 73
- Some people think universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some cites have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings People think that they should be free to choose the design they like Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15340909091 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99025081696 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2483942484 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200248784583 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102591928729 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964580933681 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149828360727 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093741351416 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.