The diagram compares sources of UK’s air pollution in terms of their mass in million tonnes(MT) over a fifteen years rime span from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, the industry accounts for the main air polluting sector, and the total pollution declined during this interval.
Three sectors are responsible for the air pollution in the UK, namely industry, transport and household. In the beginning, the first place belonged to the industry by almost 6 MT, followed by two others both at 1 MT, totally emitting 8 MT pollutants to the atmosphere. This total quantity reduced gradually to 5 MT by 2005. The industrial emissions reduced to 2 MT by the same year as well.
However, the transport sector fluctuated as per contaminants over the course of these years and overtook the industry sector to 2.5 MT in 2002, reaching to 3 MT annual emissions by 2005. Although this sector represented nearly the same trend as the households sector until 1999, the latter managed to mitigate its emissions to the environment to a negligible amount by 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...air pollution in terms of their mass in million tonnesMT over a fifteen years rime span...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'households'' or 'household's'?
Suggestion: households'; household's
...epresented nearly the same trend as the households sector until 1999, the latter managed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98285714286 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77267129722 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8524751188 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14031502158 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708758028607 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688818514623 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110504442745 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692786478154 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.