The government should pay for the course fee for everyone who wants to study at the University.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The high cost of university education is still a reason many talented students can not afford to get a higher degree and I strongly believe that it should be the government's responsibility to make education free and bear the expenses of university education.
First of all, the government had a particular budget for the student's education and it is a huge budget for students who wants to further study and somewhere it helps for the dependent of the country. If the government paid the fee for education then the students get more motivated and students try their best in the study. Apart from them, it is one type of encouragement for the study individuals. Also, nowadays, there was partiality between poor students and rich students, so the government should make attention to students study, and don't made any type of differences. Government should pay the course fee for all the students.
Furthermore, tuition fees of universities are extremely expensive, to be afforded by middle-class parents who wish to send their children to university for education, so if students have free education then students no need for the extra tuition classes. Moreover, when citizens would be assured that the government will bear the cost of their children's university education, they would be more interested in preparing their children for the university degree rather than sending them to work and earn. This would have a tremendous effect on the education level of the whole country.
Whereas, it is also a well-known fact that if we get something for free, we don't value it that much. The university classes would be full of non-serious students who would spoil the decorum of the classes, in such cases a lot of government money is wasted.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that the government should pay the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. however, the government can provide funding to the poor and needy students in the form of loans which can be repaid later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ld make attention to students study and dont made any type of differences Government...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... the course fee for all the students Furthermore tuition fees of universities are extrem...
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Suggestion: don't
...ct that if we get something for free we dont value it that much The university class...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wants to study at the University however the government can provide funding to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, whereas, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72769764951 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455357142857 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 336.0 20.2975951904 1655% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1644.0 106.682146367 1541% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 336.0 20.7667163134 1618% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324643958784 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.324643958784 0.084324248473 385% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197187653017 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111737185791 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.6 13.0946893788 1295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -261.1 50.2224549098 -520% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.2 11.3001002004 1179% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.79 8.58950901804 265% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.4 10.1190380762 1348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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