It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they turn 30, as this is best both for the individual and for the society. Do you agree or disagree?
Generally in the society, people have a different opinion for the right age of marriage. Some individuals favour making a match before 30s is more advantageous for the individual as well as society. I partially agree with this opinion and think making a match before thirty is a rational decision also it cannot be so.
First of all, family being cannot be estimated by only age at which people get married. In Uzbekistan a large number of adults get married after graduating a university. In addition, after completing formal education, they launch their careers. During this period bodies of boys and girls are healthy as well as energetic
Secondly,
In conclusion, although there are some arguments over which the golden age is for marriage, it seems to me that perfect age to get married is in the early 30s to some extent, which is best for both individuals and society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75657894737 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59913387182 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 152.0 20.2975951904 749% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 723.0 106.682146367 678% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 152.0 20.7667163134 732% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 97.0 7.06120827912 1374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321421437053 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.321421437053 0.084324248473 381% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20020028832 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383947161891 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 77.0 13.0946893788 588% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -82.8 50.2224549098 -165% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 62.6 11.3001002004 554% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.29 8.58950901804 166% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 62.8 10.1190380762 621% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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