The two given maps compare the layout of Grane public park in 1920 when it opened first, and today.
Overall, different minor and major changes are made since its establishment, while the location and area of the park were left untouched.
According to the maps, the park had two main entrances on the northern and southern wings, the former to Arnold Avenue and the latter to Eldon Street. While both entrances still exist, a new underground entrance from the car park to the south-east corner of the park is added. Another major difference is the replacement of the central fountain with a rose garden, leading to the relocation of seats from the walls to the surrounding of this garden. There is also another rose garden in the north-west corner which was available since 1920, whereas the other garden on the north-east part is now substituted with a café, and the third rose garden which used to be at the south-west is totally removed.
In addition, the traditional stage for musicians at the left side is renovated to an amphitheater for concerts, and the glasshouse in the south-east part was changed to a water feature. The last but not least difference is the replacement of pond on the north-east corner with a play area for kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: MAKE_SINCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sense'?
Suggestion: sense
...ferent minor and major changes are made since its establishment while the location an...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... the southwest is totally removed In addition the traditional stage for musicians at ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...changed to a water feature The last but not least difference is the replacement of pond o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70697674419 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54396070598 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 215.0 22.4926829268 956% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1012.0 112.824112599 897% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 215.0 22.9334400587 937% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 5.23603664747 1280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162181744154 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162181744154 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117452958585 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103117371279 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 108.3 13.2329268293 818% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -129.83 61.2550243902 -212% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.8 10.3012195122 823% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.53 8.06136585366 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 88.0 10.9970731707 800% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 11.0658536585 479% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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