In the past most people live in the village where everyone knew everyone else.Nowadays most people live large cities were they can know few people in their area what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of in a small community
Now a days most people tend to live in big city,for its own advantages,while some year ago they are live in small villages.Although living in small community has some draw backs.I belive that it has more benifit
Firstly, the small community create well bheviour and social skill from elders.so it can be personally give attention on their children.Village have small type of advantages like there are fresh air,they get pure water and beautiful aetmosphere.there were good arrengment of palnts big farm.Secondly there are friendly nature.So they do not feel alonleness there.
On the other side,there are some draw back of small village.there have not good infrastructure as compare to big city.Urban area has good school and hospital facility,therefore students and people did not have good opportunities to get good education and good health service.Moreover,people were dificult to improve their knowladge because of lack of morden technology thts why more and more people migrate to city
To pen down there are plus point of live in village such as good aetmosphere healthy health where as other side their are do not have good education and lack of morden technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15957446809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24277935214 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 188.0 20.2975951904 926% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 970.0 106.682146367 909% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 188.0 20.7667163134 905% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 83.0 7.06120827912 1175% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246721298081 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246721298081 0.084324248473 293% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144961040293 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518577399068 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 96.9 13.0946893788 740% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -127.8 50.2224549098 -254% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.8 11.3001002004 688% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.98 8.58950901804 186% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 77.2 10.1190380762 763% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 78.0 10.7795591182 724% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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