Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that,now a days siginifiant problem of nature is lossing some kind of palnts and wild life.On the other side some human beings claim that their are more important climet issue.we will discuss both point and give persnol opinion in the end
Firstly,there are noticeable reason of decline number of "plant" and "animal".One of them day to day the environment is become a wrose,for this issue animals and plants have decrease.just for example in the city more and more built fectory,there are lots of industry release their west on land and river.Second reson is so many animals used for diffrent type of testing trial,and some cosmetic company their product on animal for skin testing beacuse they want to know how to react their product on skin.
On the other side some people think they have also considerable issue from the wrose environment such as they do not take pure air.Aged people are most affected by wroes environment for example they have lungs cancer issue,aged people feel sigh problem.Some time children affected from air polution.
To be conclude,there are lots of environmental problem which can lots of loss palnt and animal,neverthless pepple belive that there are many considerable prolem of human being.people would be save our creaters and plants
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10952380952 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84489836585 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 210.0 20.2975951904 1035% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1073.0 106.682146367 1006% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 210.0 20.7667163134 1011% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 7.06120827912 949% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226000824771 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226000824771 0.084324248473 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133114062693 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07472312736 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 107.6 13.0946893788 822% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -150.13 50.2224549098 -299% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 86.4 11.3001002004 765% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.84 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.66 8.58950901804 206% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.0 10.1190380762 850% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 86.0 10.7795591182 798% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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