A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
Tell your friend you understand the problem
Explain what happened to you in the past
Suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Rose,
I received your mail yesterday and it was nice to hear from you after a long while. The letter stated your complain about the problems which you are encountering at your workplace and I felt obliged that you have asked my recommendation regarding the same.
I am well-acquainted with the fact that working as a team is quite challenging because of some annoying colleagues as they are always trying to let you down. Office politics is not an exception for any employee as I have also been the victim of this kind of situation.
You would remember that I left my previous job at HCL in hassle and the reason behind was one of my subordinates who made wrong allegations on me. There was some problem in office for which I was being blamed as he manipulated the senior with his sugar-coated words. I was quite pissed off at that time.
However, when I complained the HR department, solution was in hand, but it was unsatisfactory. Therefore, I jumped onto the next opportunity which gave me fine career. I would also recommend you to go for communication first. Still, if no measure is found, then switching the company is not at all a bad option as it would mean exploring new realms of your profession.
Hope this suggestion would take away your worry and try to stay calm for thinking out wisely.
Yours truly,
Mary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55274261603 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71827563255 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 237.0 16.3608247423 1449% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1079.0 76.5299724578 1410% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 237.0 16.8248392259 1409% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 90.0 4.34317383033 2072% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2752425002 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2752425002 0.0766984524023 359% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144886196795 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112098213292 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.5 8.37731958763 1415% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -152.16 70.7449484536 -215% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.4 7.45979381443 1252% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.72 7.59969072165 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.8 8.54432989691 1133% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 119.0 8.15463917526 1459% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.