A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work You have had a similar problem in the past Write a reply to your friend In your letter Tell your friend you understand the problem Explain what happened to you in the past Suggest possi

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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
Tell your friend you understand the problem
Explain what happened to you in the past
Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

Dear Ankur
How are you? I heard that you are facing a problem at your work. You find it difficult to work with that kind of problem. You don't have to be worry and have some patience. It is not a serious problem that you can't solve.

Working with a annoying colleague is very common problem. Your co-worker doesn't like to work with you and motivate you to leave the company.
I faced same problem in my previous company and my team leader always tries to push down me and insult me in front of whole team. I always feel under pressure while working with him but I didn't let him to destroy my future and simply discuss my problem with the HR. As a result, My team leader was warned verbally and I never faced that difficulty in my office. Moreover, I believe resign is not the solution of your problem and you have to show some courage and face this problem and try to talk to HR about this situation.

I hope you will suggestion and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding this matter.

Best wishes
sim

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to work with that kind of problem. You dont have to be worry and have some patience...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e. It is not a serious problem that you cant solve. Working with a annoying colle...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...em that you cant solve. Working with a annoying colleague is very common probl...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... is very common problem. Your co-worker doesnt like to work with you and motivate you ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...r pressure while working with him but I didnt let him to destroy my future and simply...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38860103627 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18397316488 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7854147576 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1538461538 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355137199962 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154810841674 0.0766984524023 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113744264096 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249335652581 0.12726935374 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118234922882 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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