Some people tend to play computer game rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done tackle to problem.
Some individuals prefer to play online sports rather than physical games. This is because of advancement in technology and its availability to everyone, and its can be tackled by particular time allocation for sports.
Now a days people show preference toward playing on computers and mobile phone instead of going play ground for it. There are many reasons but most common and important is development in technology and its accessible to everyone at low cost. The smarts phone and computers become absolute necessity of life, and it have many application and features for enjoyment in free time along with connecting with others. The online gaming took shape of industry and these game are so addictive and fascinating with its rewards and points. And another its convenite because at any time and place you can play on the other side physical sport tiring and require partners which is difficult to find and lose its charm. While online there are many people gaming and can be easily find person who is also playing in any part of world.
The problem is online sports should avoid and actual sport which require energy to play and have beneficial effects on health encourage. this can be achieve by giving some time for activities such as football or any other personal favorite kind of activity. The children at school play but young generation don't in such case each family should plan time of each day which goes to gaming. In this way a healthy lifestyle and family bond created. Many people play basket ball at home because its don't require many equipment and space also.
In conclusion, As change in life style, habits are also changing shift and reliance at technology increased. This is also true for leisure time activities moved to electronic gadgets in place of real life. Our too much dependency on electric instrument is main cause and can be control its extreme usage by consideration of physical exercise importance and particularly bring time out of secdule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'smarts'' or 'smart's'?
Suggestion: smarts'; smart's
... accessible to everyone at low cost The smarts phone and computers become absolute nec...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ecome absolute necessity of life and it have many application and features for enjoy...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'many applications'.
Suggestion: many applications
... absolute necessity of life and it have many application and features for enjoyment in free time...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much equipment', 'a good deal of equipment'.
Suggestion: much equipment; a good deal of equipment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88588588589 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5077574456 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 333.0 20.2975951904 1641% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1627.0 106.682146367 1525% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 333.0 20.7667163134 1604% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 57.0 7.06120827912 807% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259608592519 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259608592519 0.084324248473 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179001761493 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946641330825 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 168.1 13.0946893788 1284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -266.52 50.2224549098 -531% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.2 11.3001002004 1179% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.61 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 135.2 10.1190380762 1336% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.