Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Few people think that it's better to accept a bad situation. On the other hand some argue that we should try and improve such situations.Let's discuss briefly about both the parts in this essay.
Firstly, let's talk about the people who believe to accept a bad situation.The main reasons behind it can be that there might be something good hidden behind it. This category of people think that this might be an indication from god as well. Usually these kind of people adjust in any kind of environment. There will be many bad situations we come accross in our lives, such as unsatisfactory job, shortage of money to run the home etc. Though this of kind of people are less around us, but these are the ones who can achieve a lot in their lives.Let's take can example of person who lost his job in this pandemic. Before COVID-19 started he was at good position but now, he has lost his job. This person will defintely try to adjust in his life by comprimising plethora of things.Even though, he gets a job offer of company which pays him less he will be ready to accept the offer. This is called life, where we adjust for a living.
In contrast to it, let's discuss about the people who argue saying that it's better to give a try to improvise the situation. It's good saying this, but it's quite hard to implement. It requires a lot of hardwork to reach that goal. These kind of people are regarded as optimistic, they never loose hope. They try until they don't succeed. Let us consider an example where a person who is currently working in a company has lots of pressure on him. He is looking out for a job in the market to get rid of the current employer. So, here if that person gets a job from other company it is good for him. Now, he can jump to a new company where he can enjoy his time by working in the friendly environment.
At the end I would say when you have the options to improvise the situation, you have to give a try. But when you are need of something then we have to adjust at any cost.Depending on the situation the person needs to take action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, well, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 3.15609756098 602% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 5.60731707317 1106% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 423.0 196.424390244 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29550827423 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 3.73543355544 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40248219681 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 106.607317073 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465721040189 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 283.868780488 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 1.53170731707 979% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 8.94146341463 257% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6386729519 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.23603664747 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22874209002 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651118595912 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744442510626 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166697093119 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122764719378 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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