Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.
Now-a-days, the usage of own means of transport is very common in the today societies. it creates the problem of the traffic congestion and pollution all over the world.however,the use of public transport is one of the possible solutions to deal with this issue.
Primarily,use of private cars leads to traffic problems.Every person has their own car, which means creating a lot of traffic problem.More over,in the metropolitan cities, there is more traffic jam more than an hour and people are blowing the horns, thus it became the worst situation.And more it is late to there works they want to face many issues.However,the sound environmental pollutions are increasing and health issues also takes place.
Secondary,More motor vehicle means more pollution.The harmful gases are exhausted from the vehicle it results to the air pollution to the world. For Example the organs in our body is effected and lot of problems occur.Moreover,ozone layer depletion as a consequence of pollution can cause skin problems.
The solution to these problem is to maximize the use of public transport.the government should motivate the public to use the public transport . Further more, the use of public transport also helps to the public to save there expenditure and also the public each there jobs in time.
To Conclude, traffic congestion and pollution are the arising problems of extensive use of private means of transportation. Nevertheless,the use of public transport is the one of the best way to resolve the traffic jam problem. I believe the citizens of our nation will be free from all the negative side effects of this problem.so, using the public transport is the safest side for all the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23760100043 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.585825309 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126979058189 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544726334597 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502583407526 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752708825689 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285604279897 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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