Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.
How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people blame social problems such as drug addiction, unemployment for causing violence in society while others associate the violent scenes in movies with this matter. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the media is the main factor leading to the booming of social violence.
Firstly, the levels of violence in films accelerate and so does the young's exposure to it. Children learn by observing and modeling adults, so if a child watching too many violent movies, he will imitate that negative behavior. As a result, he will develop violent actions, which then leads to violence in society.
Secondly, movies tend to encourage violence by impending that the characters who are violent are attractive. The viewers who watch these movies may then be violent for the impression given by the media. Some people claim that it is not the media but parents that make the children aggressive. I still strongly blame the movies for causing such violence in both children and society.
Thirdly, the development of the internet means movies can be transmitted everywhere, which enables violent movies to be viewed worldwide. It is obvious that the number of people exposed to aggressive scenes is increasing, which causes the level of violence in each country to rise sharply.
In conclusion, although the media is not the only element that increases the rate of violence in society, the negative effects its have on children, the unrealistic way it is shown, and the global nature of the media net all contribute to the rising of the social violence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07003891051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65500840491 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3587599366 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270860168506 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964151583496 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725054288409 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140181882578 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511444390463 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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