It is important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to you.
It goes without saying that in this progressive world, where we live, watching or hearing the news is the most important part of our lives. There has been a controversial debate among individuals whether watching the news presented by people having the same point of view as us is extremely beneficial. From my perspective, we should read and hear the news presented by people having different opinion in comparison with us, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, watching the news presented by people who have not different perspectives, we cannot enjoy the living. It is not a secret to anyone that tremendous humans are living in this planet and they are totally different from each other in terms of physically, mentally, and religious, but we should learn to respect one another without putting these differences in consideration; if one cannot help judging people objectively, they are not able to experience peaceful life during the living. In this line of thought, when someone does not want to even watch the news presented with different beliefs and views, rarely does he or she enable to have astonishing relationship with different people. I am of the opinion that humans as smart and genius creatures should respect differences in appearance and thought in order to make this planet a better place for living and loving. As a result, if we try to separate ourselves from a lot of people whose views are different, we therefore will have serious problems during the life since we cannot accept other perspectives; not watching the news presented by people having different opinions is a sign of disrespect to the majority of people in the world.
Furthermore, reading or watching the news from a website whose views are not similar to us, we will turn into more open-minded and logic individuals in society. It is crystal clear that being informed of different perspectives, we are more likely to find the truth because we have an opportunity to monitor all aspects of a view; in this vein we will acquire a lot of knowledge through evaluating thoughts. Doing such a meditation, we probably change our mind about a specific subject when we find out that it is more logical to accept a true fact rather than standing in wrong opinion. To put it in more vivid picture, I listened to a Life Kit podcast that a psychologist kept saying that we should rethink instead of working harder on our goals, meaning for being good people we have to rethink about opinions, beliefs and make sure that they are true in order to continue our path and be more successful and open- minded people, but it is not possible until we have respect and accept differences and escape from the clutches of ignorance and selfishness; when I listened to such brilliant speech, I decided to rethink about my purposes and beliefs and I now are able to get rid of ignorance. Had I not listened to that podcast, I would stand on my shoddy and wrong beliefs.
In sum, not only will people experience peace during the life time, they will also, be more open-minded individuals who have a hearing ear for listening to people’ opinions.
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- People who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy 58
- Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished 42
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Some people say that we should follow our dreams Others think we should focus on achieving realistic goals 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enables'.
Suggestion: enables
...eliefs and views, rarely does he or she enable to have astonishing relationship with d...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...will people experience peace during the life time, they will also, be more open-minded in...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ear for listening to people’ opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2624.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 543.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83241252302 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74480935755 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.063504897 48.9658058833 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.428571429 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7857142857 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232469447333 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104211712709 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097102258915 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156108586785 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884282247389 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.