Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different?
some people in the world think that it is helpful to watch or read a newspaper presented by a person who has also the same ideology that they have. However, I totally disagree with that stand. I firmly believe that in day to day life we should listen to the opposite side of the situation. I will illustrate my beliefs in the subsequent paragraph.
First, we should listen to the opposite side of the situation because in this modern world of social media, there are many fake pedalers implanting their agenda to weaken the democratic system. For instance, in India the mainstream tv news channels and their social media accounts post pictures of wrestlers' protests in which they showed smiling with help of artificial intelligence. consequently, some people who have been regular tv watchers believe that news for a while, but later it was cleared by wrestlers that were not smiling by the original photograph. it is not always the same as it is, sometimes they post original content also, it is just times that matter most. As a result, it is important to clarify both sides of a particular thing before judging it.
second, we have to recognize the different pictures of a situation because it could happen to you also. sometimes the karma hit very badly. For example, the news channel named ABP news, always tries to spread hate comments about muslim people and there was one reporter who was muslim but blindly worked for her boss. later people started to ask questions about his loyalty towards the channel because of her religion. consequently, she resigned from the channel. it is certainly clear to see why we should stay neutral while reading and watching the news.
last, we should try to know other side news because we have a right to know the truth in the country and we should use it to, verify such news channels or newspapers. For example e there is a man in Delhi named zuber who is a social media personality, known for his fact-checking of news which is intentionally spread by mainstream news channels. whats zuber do is use their right to know information and question the news channels if they telecast something wrong. Like zuber, everyone in the community also tries to do that. it is a sign of active citizen.
In conclusion, this topic seems complex for someone and we can get a long debate on it. Still, in the light of the reasons I mentioned, I believe that people need to watch or read different news presented by different people who have different views.
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- TPO 28 Integrated 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57820370876 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514942528736 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9372777152 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5909090909 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164766025034 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474502772462 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590839555205 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109582876575 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051173371868 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.