Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores and caring for children at home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In order to meet the demand of today’s life, both men and women must be involved in full-time jobs globally. Thus, there is a common sense that the domestic chores and responsibilities with children should be shouldered equally between two genders. From my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion and this essay will explain the reasons in detail.
To commence with, we are living in the era of gender equality, in other words, there is no difference between males and females about their responsibilities in life. There is a stereotype, especially in Asia, that women must be the ones who take responsibility for domestic tasks as well as raising children alongside their career. As a result, they do not have enough time and energy for the chores at home which requires a joint hand of the husband. If women can work and earn money, so men can also handle the domestic chores. The fair division of duty will reduce the possibilities of quarrels, conflicts and even break up in a family.
Furthermore, the fairly shouldering of responsibility can strengthen the family connection. The presence of help and sharing in a family means that each member loves each other. This sharing can help to boost their ties and efficiency in completing domestic and professional tasks. Subsequently, parents will have more time to spend on their son or daughter which will positively affect their development. With sufficient guidance, love and education, a child can grow to be a good citizen.
In conclusion, I reckon that both genders should shoulder the same responsibilities at work and at home as it will benefit society’s equality as well as children’s growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03610108303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00540161097 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8541665231 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255419782279 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764836486172 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582055017672 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147769856445 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059803474869 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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