You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that now you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue your course at this time
Say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Thomas
When I started your photography course back in January I was very excited and committed to it. Sadly, in the last few weeks, I haven't been able to be 100 percent focused on the activities you gave me.
I have been through a stressful time at my job, A couple of colleagues have been removed from their responsibilities from now on those activities were assigned to me. Furthermore, my workload has increased significantly.
During the upcoming weeks, I am going to visit a couple of factories abroad and won't be able to attend classes. Which, on the one hand, this course is very important to me, unfortunately, I will have to quit it at least for the remainder of the year. On the other hand, embarking on this trip will be a very good opportunity for my career and a chance that I have been expecting for quite some time.
Hoping to see you again next year, and keep learning from the best.
Kind Regards
Carlos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... to it. Sadly, in the last few weeks, I havent been able to be 100 percent focused on ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vities were assigned to me. Furthermore, my workload has increased significantly....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5421686747 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64363816755 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8356030527 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178854880085 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561241272646 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423903368567 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989284967716 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191453385793 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.