In the present time, people have various opinions regarding job culture. some say that satisfaction is more important than security whereas, others believe that we cannot expect satisfaction every time, a permanent job is a supreme concern. In this essay, I would like to highlight my points on job satisfaction is of less importance than job security.
Firstly, to compete in this rapidly growing world one has to have a good job. A good job has tons of importance in someone's life because the employee and the dependent people on the employee are directly connected with the type of job he is doing; and how much happy he is doing that job. The person doing the job knows the importance of a job where there is tough competition among the candidates to acquire the seat for the same job. In the end, considering all these factors one cannot always go for job satisfaction.
Finally, In countries like India where the population is vast and there are a plethora of skilled workers for the limited number of jobs; such conditions make people do any kind of job. certainly, If someone is working for a good organization with good monthly pay, but he finds himself in a situation in which he is not satisfied with his job due to his seniors' misbehaviors. In this situation, he can't change his job because it will take time and commitment. So it's better to work unsatisfied sometimes to look for the things which nobody can explain.
I would like to conclude this essay by saying that, yes sometimes people have to neglect the satisfaction part and look for a permanent job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, whereas, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73550724638 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70371194584 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4800396658 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445575615572 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177965226047 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100057042462 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287967119913 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137389909511 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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