Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The floor plan indicates the details of a particular health facility of the year 2005 and modifications made in the present day.
Overall, It can be seen that the whole plot has been changed and the aim was to increase the capacity of the center by all means.
Firstly, the 2005 plan shows that the car parking at that time was only for 12 vehicles exactly opposite to the entrance. Whereas, the rest of the ground level was converted into a garden. Further, the Inside design represents four rooms,
three consulting and one office opposite each other, followed by a Reception desk in between the rooms. Lastly, there was a Physiotherapy room connected at the backside of the building.
Moving forward to the present day scenario, the parking capacity is been increased to 30 cars. But, the space allotted for the garden is reduced by half.
Moreover, the location of the Entrance is been shifted with all inside rooms. at the same time, one extra room is added at the back portion of the facility for Minor operations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icles exactly opposite to the entrance. Whereas, the rest of the ground level was conve...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the Inside design represents four rooms, three consulting and one office opposite...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
... is been shifted with all inside rooms. at the same time, one extra room is added ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80898876404 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50259302464 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0680893972 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11884703681 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043184304638 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680411912669 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612243867522 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704737512093 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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