The map gives information about a university sports court
The map depicts modifications to the layout of an unspecified university sport courtyard in the year of 1990 and at present.
Overall, a number of extensive renovations took place all over the building. Besides, exiting features was relocated and converted in the process. The café and reception area which is in the middle of the site as well as outdoor poor are fundamental areas unchanged all over the given time.
In 1990, the western side of the court was a largely open are with an extensive park and car park. However, in the present day, the former was transformed into a big basketball courtyard, in the other words, the later was also demolished to make a way for other sport court, tennis court which was extended twofold courts.
The east side of the area, in the meanwhile, was enclosed by wall being into close tight site which leads to the outdoor pool being converted to indoor one. Besides, café and reception area locating adjacent to pool have been witnessed unchangeable sites all over the given spans. On the other hand, to the south side of the surround area, it is noticeable that the changing room was enlarged and relocated in front of fitness center which was built on the original site of tennis court.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...On the other hand, to the south side of the surround area, it is noticeable that the changin...
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Suggestion:
...t on the original site of tennis court.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78971962617 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53098969042 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2794659017 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.888888889 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102922582701 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428895039344 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620225178634 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799151565579 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754277256763 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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