Some people believe that the responsibility for the protection of the environment is by a transnational organization, rather than by each individual country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The worsening of the environment has been a considerable cause for concern among people from all walks of life. It is generally claimed that an international body should be solely accountable for environmental protection; I strongly believe that, however, it is the duty of each country and the concerted effort among all nations worldwide.
Of utmost importance is each individual state’s contribution to the common cause of preventing the environment from deteriorating any further. In fact, it is the country that is in and under direct contact and impact of climate changes that would feel it most clearly. Therefore, the most appropriate measures would be able to be invented and implemented. For example, if a city of a country is suffering from water pollution, it is the inhabitants in that city would suffer the most and local authorities are those who work directly with them, and thus understand their problems mostly correctly. It is hardly possible, nonetheless, for experts from other countries to fully grasp the magnitude of the problem if they just go to the site to do research to tackle with the symptoms of the problem only.
Added to this is the function of an international organization which gives most general guidance and in charge of the overall functioning of the global environment. It is true that if a minor part of the environment is adversely affected or damaged, there can be calamitous ramifications on other regions of the world as a whole. Besides, in order for an organization of global influence to be established, there should be a consensus among all the nations involved. It means that this establishment has the trust among its members to give guidance, support as well as necessary intervention when an environmental issue arises in any nation.
In short, to reverse the damaging effects on the environment, it is the role of each country, which is most crucial, coupled with the guidance and support from a world-wide organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in fact, in short, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08895705521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1074285811 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5392305227 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134282351358 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492639705256 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355630525974 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776723721917 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427719227168 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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