Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that we should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There is a long debate over weather a person should seek advice from someone when they make an important decision because these decisions have profound effect in our life. In my opinion, I personally believe that a person should ask someone else for help when they make a significant decision. In the following essay I intend to put my arguments to support my views.
To begin with, seeking someone else assistance for important decision allow us to make better choices which means it make our future well. Some people make decisions without others help and suffer the worst consequences of their choices. However, an advice from an experience person will provide the better solution. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I started the university I was so much confuse about selecting my major course. Therefore, I asked my senior cousin who recently graduated from a university. He advice me to choose accountant because it was in high demand and in near future there will be more job opportunites in this field. I made my choice as advice by him and after grduation I offered highly paid job. This would not have been possible if I had not seek advice from the experinced person. As a result, it is very important to always ask someone else for help when we want to make a critical decision.
In addition, asking for other helps for an important decision reduces our chances of errors which means we are less prone to a loss. According to a research survey people face enourmous losses in life because they make rational choices which do not involve help from others. To exemplify, when my friend moved to the New York city for his new job he wanted to buy an apartment in the city. He did not ask for anyone aid and bought an apartment in manhattan. After he moved in the apartment he came to know that it needed a lot of work in plumbing, roofing and flooring. This was result in him huge amount of money investment over the apartment due to which he had so much debt. If he took advice from other people he probably not suffer such consequences. Therefore, I think it is very advantageous to always seek someone else help when we make an important decision.
In conclusion, I believe that a person should definitely seek someone else assistant when ever they make a significant decision. This is because, it allows them to make better choices and because it prevents from huge losses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to support my views. To begin with, seeking someone else assistance for impo...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...s to make better choices which means it make our future well. Some people make deci...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...consequences of their choices. However, an advice from an experience person will provide ...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rience is a compelling example of this. When I started the university I was so much ...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...ecently graduated from a university. He advice me to choose accountant because it was ...
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...ob. This would not have been possible if I had not seek advice from the experince...
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Suggestion: sought
...ld not have been possible if I had not seek advice from the experinced person. As a...
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...ake a critical decision. In addition, asking for other helps for an important ...
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'aids'.
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... in the city. He did not ask for anyone aid and bought an apartment in manhattan. A...
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...tment due to which he had so much debt. If he took advice from other people he pro...
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...not suffer such consequences. Therefore, I think it is very advantageous to alway...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...dvantageous to always seek someone else help when we make an important decision. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57919705324 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484705882353 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5199495727 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7391304348 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251797825779 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081150245715 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966345069604 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16966867878 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191115135999 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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