You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell him/her how you found out
• explain how you feel about the news
• organise to meet your friend for a celebration
Hey Dave,
How’s it going? I feel terrible to catch up with you after such a long time! I have come to know about your engagement recently.
I recently met Steve at Dubai, while waiting for my connecting flight. He shared with me this great news of your engagement with Katie.
To be honest, I was initially quite surprised when I heard the news, but later when I came to know about the health of Katie’s father, it made sense for you both to commemorate your relationship while he is still with us. I have also shared the news with my wife Anna, she was delighted to hear your plans for marriage.
I’ll be visiting New York in May to meet my in-laws. Why don’t we plan a weekend together just like our college days and celebrate your engagement? It could also be your last party as a bachelor before you get hitched.
See you soon.
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o know about your engagement recently. I recently met Steve at Dubai, while wait...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you get hitched. See you soon. Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45222929936 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.375206976 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0182696929 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312063772479 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116186202507 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543911480586 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183216082573 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448586741766 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.