Doctors and teachers are the backbone of our nation. It is irrefutable that the medical workers and teachers put a greater positive impact to the society and hence, they deserve to get more amount of payment as compare to the sports players and celebrities. I firmly agree with this statement that the sufficient amount of money must be given to medical staff and the education faculty.
Firstly, the contribution made by doctors and educators is admiring and praiseworthy. In addition, the amount of hardwork they put on to their work is unrecognisable. Also, they are the most underrated individuals for the work they do. Therefore, they must be rewarded or there must be an urge in their salary. However, physicians plays an significant role for the survival of the human lives and they are the first hope for any patient. For example, due to this pandemic (covid-19) , doctors and nurses are the requisite warriors to fight against this virus.
Similarly, teachers also plays a vital role in every children's lives. They are responsible for making the base strong and clear of each child. Moreover, they guide their students for their better future according to their potential and ability. For instance, as per the survey conducted by education department, 65% of students are successful in their life only because of the guidance given by their professors. Thus, the payments for such tutors should be more than celebrities and sports persons.
To conclude, the unidentifiable work done by doctors and teachers must be paid more than the theatres stars because of the work which they do is inconsiderable.
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- Professional workers like doctors nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities To what extent do you agree or disagree 71
- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions 67
- Some people say that every human being can create art for example painting Others think only the people born with the ability can create art discuss both view and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...their salary. However, physicians plays an significant role for the survival of th...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...first hope for any patient. For example, due to this pandemic covid-19 , doctors ...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... example, due to this pandemic covid-19 , doctors and nurses are the requisite wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79776534349 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.246682973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182795001239 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642904773257 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609663833466 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127479443593 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519453648402 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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