Topic: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept this invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank him for the invitation.
- Explain why you cannot come.
- Ask him about other time to visit.
Topic: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept this invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank him for the invitation.
- Explain why you cannot come.
- Ask him about other time to visit.
Dear Heidon,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s very kind of you but unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new position as a medical information specialist responsible for COVID-19 vaccine project. Currently I’m under an intensive training program for new employees which consists of online modules, live-coaching sessions along with relevant quizzes. I need to pass all required courses and assessments before going live. Hence, I have necessarily paid all attention to pass the probation by the end of the training program.
Could you let me know of another time you will be free? I’d love to come and stay. To be honest, I am very interested in seeing your tropical orchid garden you have grown, meeting your wife, Annie and playing with your son, Tommy. I’ll be free in New Year and Christmas holidays or I can take a vacation in winter. Certainly, I’d like to escape the cold winter to visit you then!
Please let me know,
Your friend,
Timothy
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| 2021-05-24 | TimothyDinh | 78 | view |
| 2021-05-24 | TimothyDinh | 78 | view |
- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90456431535 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58100099017 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663900414938 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1206513739 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3888888889 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552695741731 0.216113520407 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174137895691 0.0766984524023 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178340363057 0.0603063233224 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27048307227 0.12726935374 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256168231688 0.0580467560999 441% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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