The increasing of various kinds of products effects on the hesitance on purchasing. Thus, the companies have to concern about the sales and advertisement of those products. Some people claim that it is not essential to advertise products whose quality meet human’s demands. However, I believe that it is necessary for the companies to maintain advertising.
If the products which have high sales and get a plenty of supporters are not publicized on media, they are gradually forgotten and disappeared from the customers’ mind. Due to the competition in marketing, as soon as the new products will take place of the old ones if it also meets the customers needs. For instance, the advertisement of washing powder of brand Comfort has no longer been broadcast on television in Vietnam for a long time.As a result its sales has been decreased in comparison with the other brands.
On the other hand, some people suppose that small businesses are not able to afford the advertising cost. However, if the products meet customer needs and are bought by many , the companies will have sufficient income to pay for advertisement.
To conclusion, it is denpendable on the strategies of different companies that they will decide their plans. Nevertheless, keeping the images of products in customers’ mind by advertisement is effective in the developing bussiness.
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities Discuss both views and give your own opinions 73
- If a product is good or it meets people s needs people will buy it Advertising is no more than a form of entertainment To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...n television in Vietnam for a long time.As a result its sales has been decreased i...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n television in Vietnam for a long time.As a result its sales has been decreased i...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...et customer needs and are bought by many , the companies will have sufficient inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19545454545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07328771135 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4952503242 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189601076238 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070786173504 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533945860369 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119913030951 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400288706336 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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