In tech savvy era being vegetarian has been choosen by human being.most human mankind opine, it has pilthora of merits for own well being are more significant.Therefore, certainly it would be beneficial towards world wide . However,in my honest opinion, promotion of health and prevention from diseases.which may lead towards postive reinforcement.while this trend is more beneficial to some extent,this essay will intend analysis of both views in following paragraphs.I would argue that advantages are extremely crucial rather than its drawbacks.
To begin with, health became an elementary segment for globally.which has substantially based upon dietary pattern.for instance According to Harvest University Research study has suggested 70% peoples,who do not preferred to have non vegetarian foods, Ranging from chiken,fish,meat,beef.they had effective immunity power and slow aging process though.
Overall, having fresh fruits and salads escalate towards efficient physiological and mental development.
On the contemporary,our ancestors relay upon detoxification process.which implies extraction of toxins from blood stream could be encouraged from prevent various illnesses such as hereditary , cardiovascular and neurological disorders.An article claim regarding vegetation regime.which lead to proximity health counterproductive disorder.Despite of this lack of immune system unable to encounter foreign bodies ,where as enhanced numerous sickness
In a nutshell, being eaten variety of enormous fruits and numerous nutritious foods prompt to prevention of disorders.
Although,vast majority of individual they have selected to be vegetarian,yet they are aware it is merits .which promotes health and mitigate biological illness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37130801688 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79767449129 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.759493670886 0.561755894193 135% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.688002162 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.666666667 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116388568038 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052776303914 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031101984202 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464671424776 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402611576525 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.51 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.26 12.4159519038 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.23 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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