Now a days, Overweight has become intergal aspect of human-being in world wide.which may lead to cardiovascular and neurological disorders.However, effective dietary pattern and physical workout tend to mitigate this health issue.
Firstly, food plays significant role in our monotonous routine.nourshied diet could transform our life and prevent from various harmful impact on physiological system.Thus, detoxification of blood necessary for enhancement of immunity.Despite of this several sources of fruits and vegetables which promotes vitamins, minerals.Moreover,low calory and high protein diet could encourage to stay away from obesity.For instance according to American research those people have well structured entire day relatively with viable nutrients, they never be gain weight in entire life.In nutshell, once follow efficient dietatics would prompt to healthier well-being.while, knowledge of diet,food with accurate quantity of calories count helps to maintain body weight.
Secondly, constantly usages of physical exercise,which provoke to release "endophorin" hormone from "piturity gland".that hormone responsible for joy and delightful event.while, 30 minutes regular mild walking, jogging tend to maintain the blood sugar level and destruction of fat in the body.an individual who has 90 kilo gram.intensly work being done by her in gym.meanwhile,she lost around 25 kilograms over 3 months.diet and workout work simultaneously for better empowerment nevertheless,heavy work also prevents from sleep deprivation.
In conclusion, although,weight problem emerged day by day,abudunt nutrition with quality of exercise can prevent obesity.people would be able to accept this healthy lifestyle.
- IELTS Writing task 1 Academic 56
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- Obesity is now a major global epidemic What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem 56
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole Discuss these view and give your own opinion 47
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43162393162 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94250862296 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.75641025641 0.561755894193 135% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.669564192 49.4020404114 485% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.25 106.682146367 353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.5 20.7667163134 282% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 7.06120827912 467% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905467447465 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650922179387 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404025957992 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650922179387 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404025957992 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 13.0946893788 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.5 11.3001002004 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.9 12.4159519038 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.19 8.58950901804 154% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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