Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
In my point of view being honest in relationships is necassery and it is one of the most important issue's between comunnicating people.
I feel this way for two reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
No body likes hearing lies, every kind of relationships in society based on trust and for being trustfull person we most tell the truth because if we not telling whats really happend and the way we truly feel about problems, when people figure out we were not honest they feel bad or maybe they gonna be mad at us and decide to not be in relationship with us any more.
when we change facts people are not able to behaive correct for example:
imagine kids not answering honestly to their parents when they ask questions about their school. like these kind of questions:
are they comftable? or any body botter them? is there something that annoyed them? or ...?
if they telling lies it will be hard for parents to understand what exactly hurt their children and what they shuold to do for solve the problem.
in this sequations because parents are concern about their children, and they don't know the true story, they might be confuse and treat wrong to their kids or school faculty and make a new issue insteed solve the older problem.
this example demonstrates how important telling truth can be.
Secondly, we loose our firneds and also their helpes. because if we telling lies for every tiny issue or not telling truth about reallity, at the beging they will be valenture to help us but after a while when they realize we change some facts and we don't tell the hole story about issue, they can not belive us. and also when we facing seurios problem there is no one available to help because nobody can trust us. as a result we loose one by one persons who care about us and had a important role in our lives and they will not interest to support us any more.
one day our friends will inerdouse us as a lier person, so because of our behavior we will be in trouble to make relationships.
in conclusion, i strongly belive that we have to telling truth in every step in our lives and be honest to our self and every person we are in relationship with. and also make a better and stronger friendships for our piece.
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- TOEFL T P O 32 Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53201970443 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39332723654 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480295566502 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8329038676 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162375137166 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546158209369 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700549398972 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727285599334 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739764606429 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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