It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
maybe for some people, it's a challenging situation to decide are they need new relationships? or just the old friends are enough for their life. but for me, it's completely clear. I always tend to keep my old friends. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
After age 23, people prefer to be in safe relationships, so mine either. I prefer my old friendships because I spent enough time getting to know them and now I am familiar with their behavior and the way they see life, and also they know me. so because of that, they will totally understand me and they will not get upset or angry when I treat them in my special way because they know my personality and they can recognize easily that am I joking or am I serious at that certain time. I'm not worried about if do something she will be mad at me. I believe when we found our besties we will be happy for the rest of our lives. because we found the person who is similiar to us and we can enjoy every moment we spend together.
Secondly, in old friendships we are comfortable and we are not afraid of talking honestly, because I know if I'm talking about my issue and tell them my whole story, nobody judges me or make fun of me, and also they will not use my words for hurting me in future. they are the most trustworthy person in my life. besides that, I know they listen to me and they will be available for me every time I'm getting into trouble, they will help me and trying to figure out what we can do to solve the problem. they will be there for me and I'm not alone.
For example, when I was fighting with my cancer disease my friends didn't leave me alone. they care about me and help me to keep going and never give up. they try to make the sickness easy for me by being with me in the hospital and helping me to find medicines. At those time they adapt my dog and bring her to their home and feed her just because I was in a bad situation and the only thing that they really care about was my piece. This example demonstrates how valuable keep old friends can be.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we must keep our old friends because they truly love us just the way who we are not for benefits.
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- TOEFL T P O 32 Integrated Writing Task 3
- The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict 88
- Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now 70
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 70
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, honestly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 98.0 22.412803532 437% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 429.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17482517483 5.08290768461 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27703971951 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459207459207 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 3.25607064018 461% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.675362344 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934136756276 0.272083759551 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468814844078 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695595783599 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886765424249 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612795290001 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.3589403974 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 53.8541721854 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 12.2367328918 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.42419426049 77% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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