Direction: use the following words, brusque, clandestine, suffice, apprise, aversion, innate, dovetail, errant, victual, expound, aphorism, uncanny, quintessential, bevy, and caliber to form a sentence about how your last weekend went. Minimum 120 words.
There is an aphorism, if you don’t plan your day, your day will plan it for you. I am a clandestine type, I would say it’s innate in me. When I went home after my Friday work, I looked at my fridge, there was no victual there, and I was foxed and everything seems uncanny for me because I have no money for most of the things I needed this weekend. Well, I decide to manage the little cash I had, to get some stuff that doesn’t cost much, but at least the things have to suffice me, my weekend doesn’t have to be quintessential. I went to church on Sunday and I visited my people, they will be expecting a gift as usual, but in a brusque way, I managed to expound the reason why I was on low key this weekend.
I also attended an invitation from one of our own, in our usual caliber of bevy. The apprisal showed on my phone late Friday night around 11 pm, when I read the apprisal, I just recalled that I was supposed to send my clothes to the laundry, which I did not. Oh God, what now? I was pondering what am going to wear as at that time, in our usual manner, I am supposed to be dovetailing with my friends. Now, everything looks so sick for me. Well, I say to myself, being absent from the invitation is errant behavior and you will be fined for that.
Finally, I was at the occasion, though my weekend was unbalanced, but I managed to avert most of my errors from becoming public, honestly nothing has to be quintessential, thank God, I was really myself.
Thank you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a brusque way" with adverb for "brusque"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will be expecting a gift as usual, but in a brusque way, I managed to expound the reason why I ...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... Oh God, what now? I was pondering what am going to wear as at that time, in our u...
^^
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ehavior and you will be fined for that. Finally, I was at the occasion, though m...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, honestly, if, look, really, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18466898955 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46646091507 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1407106546 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853947290596 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301238363186 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260117895022 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531889897516 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404836133209 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.26 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.