People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study what are the reasons How can we solve this problem

Nowadays, individuals prefer to purchase their own vehicles because they like to travel in their own vehicles such as bike, car and many more. They use these vehicles for going to jobs or study and expanded more time to travel. In this eassy, i will discuss the causes as well as solution of this problem in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are several reasons for this point. First reason of this problem is traffic congestion. As people prefer to travel in their personal vehicles, it leads traffic on roads. For instance, in recent years, a number of people spend their money for buying own car amd travel in their vehicles. For that reason, day by day traffic is increasing on the roads. So that people spend more time to travel. Second cause is that the condition of public transportation. In the modern era, people cannot like to wait for buses and trains, so they do not travel in public transportation because of worse quailty of these transport. As a result, for that reason everyone prefer to travel in their personal car.
On the other hand, there are various solution to mitigate traffic problems. Firstly, government should encourage people to use public tranport because it is very convient nad chepest for everyone and easily people addord it. As a result, authority would generate revenue from this travel. Secondly, authority should increase the prices of petrol, diesal. So people will use public transport. In addition to, laws should be imposed by management to use less private trasport and also implemented new method to use private trasport like odd, even technique. Therefeore, they can less use their car and vehicles to travel in order to study and works.
To conclusion, people use their own vehicles for their crucial purpose like going to hospitals and other personal issues. Also, the goevernment should be improved public transport.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9872611465 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5273545046 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490445859873 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0549787268 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9523809524 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332558388959 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109108034053 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921375382572 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199338403503 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966416271255 0.056905535591 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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