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Nowadays skillful sport players are getting more attention for reason that they are more well-paid compared to other jobs. Those who believe that it is adequate while some people argue that it is unequal. This essay will examine both views and give the author’s ideas.
On the one hand, it is reasonable for sportsmans to get a high salary for some reasons. Firstly, many sport competitors win the games, they will get the winning prize and bring enormous profits to their companies. This is also a motivation to boost up the economic growth of its country. Secondly, professional players such as footballers may get attention from international watchers and make their country more popular around the world by joining various worldwide football competitions.
In contrast, many people suppose that it is unfair. The one reason for it is that sports are physical activities, so most people can play them. Professionals become skillful because they may spend a more long time practicing and train themselves. Supposed everyone spends time enough, they could also become proficient. In addition, the unemployment rate is increasing more and more these days and it results in many idlers take their jobs as footballers on account of their thoughts, they believe that the most essential factor to become successful is as exercising as much as possible and it is not realistic.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with those who believe that it is unequal for sport professionals to have a higher salary than other jobs. Sportsman's jobs are like many other careers. According to all careers, the more harder they work, the more successful they will be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
... careers. According to all careers, the more harder they work, the more successful they wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11851851852 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7337849672 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7584542121 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960106312025 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389800708478 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433180141441 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732080564434 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555865338928 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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