Writing task 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The past fifty years have witnessed a vast increase in people migrating to other nations, especially those from the Third World, which raises concern about the integration of newcomers into the community. Whereas there are valid arguments to the contrary, in my experience, it is their responsibility to accept the norms of social behavior of the host country. The justifications for this are twofold.
First of all, it is vitally important that immigrants observe the laws of their host country for the sake of societal order. Imagine how chaotic it would be if they refused to drive on the same side of the road like many other native people. It is, therefore, necessary for all these immigrants to conform themselves to that country’s rules regardless of differences from theirs, otherwise they will fall foul of the laws.
Further and even more importantly, though, in order for immigrants to shortly blend into the new environment, I would contend it is crucial the local’s customs be paid respect to. A salient instance is that learning the native language will enable newcomers to communicate effectively as well as strike up a relationship with people there. In other words, this will facilitate deeper mutual understanding between people from different cultural backgrounds.
By way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that immigrants should familiarize themselves with the social norms of their adopted country. It is my belief that this will not only benefit the whole nation but also gives them an opportunity to expand their horizons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203187251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89864116463 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3878198629 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185306983982 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614582627825 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372197926376 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101038967678 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112532460125 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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