when choosing a job,the salary is most important consideration. To what extent you are agree or disagree?
Salary the word alone describes the needs, aspirations, dreams and desires of a person in life. It is arguably the first thing that comes to one's mind while choosing a career, platform and more importantly required employment. I agree with the fact and will elaborate the reason further ahead.
Any normal human being with the condition to pick between money and learning is troubled. But, 90 percent of the people will select money as their first priority regardless of what they get to learn and understand about the kind of work they are going to do. As, this parameter will be the scale to decide their family's needs and living standards for the future. Although, learning can make you the master of a particular task but when bills are luring near it is not worth a penny.
Moreover, everyone wants the best thing in life in terms of employment, luxury and social status. This all can be achieved with a finger tip if an employee has a best salary package in the industry where he/she is working. Further future plans can be constructed on the basis of a handful amount of money as a person will be able to start a family and educate his/her child to the best schools, universities and a better standard of living in society.
Even in some parts it does not matter which job a guy gets but the salary package will always be the eye-candy that everyone gazes upon while deciding whether to respect or not. In today's time the companies nowadays has started to ask in the interviews about the cost to company per annum that the interviewees desire to get an idea whether that candidate will stay or not in the office. Even, many qualified professionals leave highly respected positions because of the paycheck that they get if it does not suit their level.
In the end, salary is and always will be the factor to decide whether a person will do a particular job or not. As, nowadays the living standard and dignity can only be maintained if a person has a great amount of cash and salary slip is the reason for many brilliant minds changing their decision day by day.
- You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter 1 Explain why you have moved 2 Describe the new house 3 Invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words 73
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Although you have never formally studied computing you have always been interested in computers You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have complete 89
- Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved 73
- You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend Write a letter to your employer and say Explain how this training course would help you Why won t you be able to attend it Suggest a way to have that training again 78
- You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ed with a finger tip if an employee has a best salary package in the industry whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59029649596 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43348014556 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6968473835 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100877499197 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339882163337 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322447499169 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579839638276 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338106983076 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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